Showing posts with label Writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Writing. Show all posts

Friday, June 1, 2012

Character Description !

The past few days Room 22 at Pt.England School have been studding on how to write a character description. It has been very difficult for some of us, but we were able to write at least one paragraph. But first we had to practise writing a character description on some one special at school, and I picked my amazing teacher Mrs Nua. I wrote a paragraph about her appearance. ( what they look like ). Here is my paragraph about my awesome teacher Mrs Nua.
 
: Silky short blond hair, up and go attitude amazingly tall. The best thing to describe my beautiful teacher are her big blue eyes when they sparkle in the sunshine.


.....TO BE CONTINUED.....

Thursday, May 10, 2012

Sunflowers

For the last past few weeks, we have been learning a new technique in painting, from a famous man called, Vincent Vah Gogh. Vincent Van Gogh was a dutch painter. He was one of the most famous painters in all of history. His technique was about stroking and blending the colours to make it look real. It was pretty amazing how this work is done! But at first when i tired to use this technique it didn't really work out but my finished project was just AMAZING it blew me away! I really like how he makes the colours blend in with each other. Well this is my finished produce I have tried to blend the colours on my sun flower! You should try it for your self, it really got me more into art.

Wednesday, September 21, 2011

Tangled Punctuation..

Here is the story Tangled!! All I have done to it is added punctuation.
This is the story of how I died, don’t worry this is actually a very fun story, and the truth is it isn’t even mine, this is a story of a girl named Rapunzel. And it starts with the sun, now once upon a time a single drop of sunlight fell from the heavens, and from that small drop of sun, grew a magic golden flower. It had the ability to heal the sick and injured, oh you see that old women over there, you might wanna remember her she’s kinda important. Well centuries past, and a hop skip and a boat ride away, there grew a kingdom. The kingdom was ruled by a beloved king and queen, and the queen well she was about to have a baby. And she got sick, really sick she was running out of time, and that’s when people usually start to look for a miracle. Or in this case, a magic golden flower.
Nah I told you she’d be important, ya see instead sharing the suns gift, this women, mother gothile horted it’s healing power, and used it to keep herself young for 100’s for years, and all she had to do is sing a “special song.” Flower gleam and glow, let your power shine make the clock reverse, bring back what once was mine.
Alright you get the gist she sing to it she gets young creepy, right?
“We found it”
The magic of the golden flower, healed the Queen. A healthy baby girl, A princess was born with beautiful golden hair. (baby happy sound) (happy proud adoring chuckle) I’ll give you a hint, that’s Rapunzel to celebrate her birth the King and Queen launched, flying lantern in to the sky.
And for that one moment everything was perfect. And then that moment ended.
“Flower gleam and glow let your power shine make the clock re” the old lady gasps
(a crying baby) gothem broke into the castle and stole the child and just like that GONE! The kingdom searched and searched, but could not find the princess, for deep within the forest in a hidden tower gofile raised the child as her own.
Take what has been lost that once was mine, gothile has found her magic flower.
But this time she was determent to keep it hidden, “why can’t I go outside?”
The outside world is a dangerous place filled with horrible selfish people you must stay here, where your safe, do you understand flower.
“Yes mummy”
But the walls of that tower could not hide everything. Each year on her birthday, the King and Queen, released thousand of lantern into the sky. In hope that one day their lost princess, would return!!

Monday, August 15, 2011

Ohh My Life Cross Country..


Cross Country. Do you like Cross Country because I don’t! I am so not looking forwards to it. I didn’t know that cross country was coming up until the day before it was going to happen.

Oh my life... No way Cross Country. I HATE cross country! Do you know why I hate it? Because I hate running I am not fit. NO, I thought to myself I can run home and run to school, I sure that is good enough I think! I so do not feel like RUNNING. I hope I make it to the end and not come last. I can just imagine me coming first for the first time in my life. I would be so happy! But that will never happen. I know it.

The next day, I woke up getting ready for cross country. I didn’t really want to go but I knew I had work to finish. So I went anyways. As soon as Mrs V said year 7 girls stand at the start line. My butterflies hit me with a big pong. I was so scared that I may come last. But I believed in myself, and gave it my all. “BANG” I started running with all my might. Then I got so tried I had to start jogging.

5 minters later! Running thought the brush walk was like running up a big hill with many different levels. All you could see me doing was going up down up down all over again. As soon as I got to Mr Jacobson I have only stopped about 3 times. I felt like I was going to faint so I started to power-walk. So I did that until I go to the school fetch. As soon as I stopped I started running with all the power I had ins me. Ya I have passed the finish line.

That felt like a nightmare! I really HATE Cross Country now. You should of seen me I dropped on the ground and said that is my fitness for the rest of the year! But I have a question for all the people reading. How was your Cross Country? Thanks for reading.

Wednesday, August 10, 2011

School! School! School!

This Term has been an awesome term even. But it has only been one week of school.
I wish this term NEVER ends! I just can’t wait to learn more things about other countries.

What I have liked so far was, learning what the real stories be hide most of the flags and learning more about place’s around Auckland. Have you ever heard of a place called Hot water beach? Well I have never heard of that place. Then people have been telling me about what they did there. It sounds like a DREAM. I bet it was. I wish I could go to Hot water beach.

I am really looking forwards to find out more different countries. I am very exited about what we will be learning, but the country that I really what to learn about is South Africa. South Africa sounds like an awesome place to see and help. Most of the countries have some amazing story's. I am really looking forwards to finding interesting facts about New Zealand and other places in the world.

I really hope that I find out more things about South Africa. But what I have learnt so far, has just amazed me. Next time you hear from me I will be writing about my Cross Country.