Wednesday, September 21, 2011

Tangled Punctuation..

Here is the story Tangled!! All I have done to it is added punctuation.
This is the story of how I died, don’t worry this is actually a very fun story, and the truth is it isn’t even mine, this is a story of a girl named Rapunzel. And it starts with the sun, now once upon a time a single drop of sunlight fell from the heavens, and from that small drop of sun, grew a magic golden flower. It had the ability to heal the sick and injured, oh you see that old women over there, you might wanna remember her she’s kinda important. Well centuries past, and a hop skip and a boat ride away, there grew a kingdom. The kingdom was ruled by a beloved king and queen, and the queen well she was about to have a baby. And she got sick, really sick she was running out of time, and that’s when people usually start to look for a miracle. Or in this case, a magic golden flower.
Nah I told you she’d be important, ya see instead sharing the suns gift, this women, mother gothile horted it’s healing power, and used it to keep herself young for 100’s for years, and all she had to do is sing a “special song.” Flower gleam and glow, let your power shine make the clock reverse, bring back what once was mine.
Alright you get the gist she sing to it she gets young creepy, right?
“We found it”
The magic of the golden flower, healed the Queen. A healthy baby girl, A princess was born with beautiful golden hair. (baby happy sound) (happy proud adoring chuckle) I’ll give you a hint, that’s Rapunzel to celebrate her birth the King and Queen launched, flying lantern in to the sky.
And for that one moment everything was perfect. And then that moment ended.
“Flower gleam and glow let your power shine make the clock re” the old lady gasps
(a crying baby) gothem broke into the castle and stole the child and just like that GONE! The kingdom searched and searched, but could not find the princess, for deep within the forest in a hidden tower gofile raised the child as her own.
Take what has been lost that once was mine, gothile has found her magic flower.
But this time she was determent to keep it hidden, “why can’t I go outside?”
The outside world is a dangerous place filled with horrible selfish people you must stay here, where your safe, do you understand flower.
“Yes mummy”
But the walls of that tower could not hide everything. Each year on her birthday, the King and Queen, released thousand of lantern into the sky. In hope that one day their lost princess, would return!!

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